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Somehow your affirmation annoys me. It sounds like forcing yourself to believe it. It is contrary to the path I favor: realize the truth, don't force it on yourself. I tried to check your blog, but it seems too verbose, and "the truth about the world" sounds pretentious and arrogant. Also, you need some opening clear statement of what it is about, before expecting somebody to give you their time and attention. From the beginning you ask the reader to print out your post, which is a turn off. Consequently, I haven't read further. I hope my feedback is helpful to you.
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