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Old 19-04-2019, 03:38 AM
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Originally Posted by Realm Ki
Sprinkled with gold dust
Drawn from source to revive us
We set Spirit free.

Never tried a haiku before - did I get it right, 5 - 7 - 5? It's not words right, its 'vowel sounds'?
Nice one !
Yes, you got it right!
Oh No, actually you have 8 syllables on 2nd line.
So, not right.

This is like math combined with poetry.
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