Hello Joe. I enjoyed your poem Joe, lots packed in there I believe, and flowing into my imagination from yours, but not forced.
The lines
"I won't try to put you back into my world view
When I get there
See your faults against my fancy judgemental windows
That cost me the earth to install"---
Observation/thought nicely shared Imo.
And this Earth: Robust yet fragile, as industrial civilisation begins to find, at last.--as we push up against the perimeter fence demanding more.
petex
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