The discussion is good, poetized.
Your poem welcomed.
I chart my course and set sail towards my destiny.
Dolfin's swimming alongside, they following the tides, the stars, and dolphins desires,.
I laugh at how free they swim.
The setting sun conditions my course.
I tack into the winds of my earthly granted time and desires
To reach the unseen shore.
Create in me a clean heart, O God;
and renew a right spirit within me.
Thanks... King David.
I get it!
I need to ask of it.