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Old 07-01-2020, 12:50 AM
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Originally Posted by Serenity69
The Hourglass Effect
Jesus The Second Coming
A New Light On Time Travel
The First Trip Too Mars
The First Lunar Base
The First Space Elevator
A New Pulse Drive Spaceship
Alice In Wonderland The Teenage Years
Sabrina The Teenage Witch In Wonderland
The New Amiga Quantum Computer
Sounds really good but you might want to revise a few of your titles. Here are some examples.

Jesus: The Second Coming
The First Trip to Mars
Alice In Wonderland: The Teenage Years

He dipped the pen into the ink and then faltered for just a second. A tremor had gone through his bowels. To mark the paper was the decisive act. In small clumsy letters he wrote: ........... April 4th, 1984.
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