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Makoorakoo 17-02-2007 02:06 AM

Dark Sphere Moon
 
Hiya all,
this is a song I made but it feels more like a poem so I decided to post it here. I basically thought about how fragile humans are and how they can feel trapped within this world. I would like people to analyse and discuss what they think the words mean. It will be interesting to see your views.

its the dark sphere moon,
we know its comin soon,
we gotta get home,
coz were doomed alone,
when our fate is shown,
and our secrets owned,

its the dark sphere moon,
the silent mesmeric tune,
life is tough,
and youve had enough,
but this old stuff,
ties you to love,

its the dark sphere moon,
predicted by the runes,
but past that fate,
you cant escape,
malicious hate,
to be mind raped,

its the dark sphere moon,
trapped inside this room,
you may be stuck,
but if you have a look,
as your life shook,
you came out with luck,

its the dark sphere moon,
no sound not a boom,
you sit and stare,
at was once there,
and you really cared,
for them being there,

its the dark sphere moon,
as creatures came and loomed,
dont be scared,
of the hopes we shared,
and the pain we bared,
images in my head,

its the dark sphere moon,
death starts to bloom,
the scent of life,
leads towards the light,
so do whats right,
bring yourself to fight,

its the dark sphere moon,
we know it will end soon,
were together again,
so sleep well my friend,
we survived the end,
blessings to send,

its the dark sphere moon,
leaving the cold room,
we came from here,
we held so dear,
our feelings near,
of a loving tear.

Love and blessings to all

Moonflower 21-02-2007 07:26 AM

Hi Makoorakoo

Reading your thought provoking song/poem & your reflections with regard to humans are you not talking about yourself here where you have been to in your darkest moments & where you have come to more at peace with where you find yourself right now :hug: ?

Just my humble thoughts.

Love & Light Moonflower x

Makoorakoo 21-02-2007 08:36 AM

hi Moonflower,

To be honest it is based around some personal experiences however I also was watching depressing events on the news which brought up some empathetic feelings for others.

love and blessings to all

Moonflower 21-02-2007 06:31 PM

Greetings Makookaroo :wink:

I love music morning, noon & night & try to avoid the negativity where i can of newspapers, media especially the soaps that people so get hooked on watching & especially the chat shows that have people on with problems it never ceases to amaze me how much anger some people have for another individual I can't help but think that they need to channel their energies better but I suppose it is all part of their life's lessons..

If it were not for the negativity that sadly people seem to thrive on people would not watch tv or buy newspapers etc.

Anyway I digress & waffle lol.

Moonflower x


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