If our thoughts could speak ....
If our thoughts could speak ....
Do my thoughts travel faster Than the spoken word ? Can you feel my presence Before a word is heard ? Can you feel me close When I am so far away ? If my thoughts could speak Do you wonder what they would say ? And if your thoughts could answer Would I hear them clearly Or would they just wander astray ? Do my thoughts travel faster Than the speed of light ? Can you hear them immediately Or do they linger thru the night ? Can you feel me close When you are so far away ? If your thoughts could speak Would you whisper softly in my ear ? And if my thoughts could answer What is it you would like to hear ? Do my thoughts travel faster During the night or during the day ? If you had your choice, Do you have a preference either way ? If our thoughts could speak ….. I wonder …… What would they say ? Dream Angel xx |
Your poem has rythme I could almost feel it breathe and i could see it as a song :)
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Thank you El Barto, are you going to put it to music for me ? :smile:
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bass line ? are you taking my song fishing ? :D
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no I am better at bass than guitar :p |
ok, that would have been a first, someone taking my poem fishing, lol !
I thought bass, was a guitar ? bass would be fine :smile: |
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hmmmm, since I don't fish...
I will let you experiment........ with one of your poems ! :tongue: then you can let me know ... how it goes :D |
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