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Adrienne 18-07-2012 05:12 PM

If our thoughts could speak ....
 
If our thoughts could speak ....

Do my thoughts travel faster
Than the spoken word ?
Can you feel my presence
Before a word is heard ?

Can you feel me close
When I am so far away ?

If my thoughts could speak
Do you wonder what they would say ?

And if your thoughts could answer
Would I hear them clearly
Or would they just wander astray ?

Do my thoughts travel faster
Than the speed of light ?
Can you hear them immediately
Or do they linger thru the night ?

Can you feel me close
When you are so far away ?

If your thoughts could speak
Would you whisper softly in my ear ?

And if my thoughts could answer
What is it you would like to hear ?

Do my thoughts travel faster
During the night or during the day ?
If you had your choice,
Do you have a preference either way ?

If our thoughts could speak …..

I wonder ……

What would they say ?


Dream Angel xx

El Barto 18-07-2012 10:23 PM

Your poem has rythme I could almost feel it breathe and i could see it as a song :)

Adrienne 18-07-2012 10:27 PM

Thank you El Barto, are you going to put it to music for me ? :smile:

El Barto 18-07-2012 10:30 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Dream Angel
Thank you El Barto, are you going to put it to music for me ? :smile:

Maybe just the bass line ;)

Adrienne 18-07-2012 10:34 PM

bass line ? are you taking my song fishing ? :D

El Barto 18-07-2012 10:40 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Dream Angel
bass line ? are you taking my song fishing ? :D

hahah cute
no
I am better at bass than guitar :p

Adrienne 18-07-2012 10:42 PM

ok, that would have been a first, someone taking my poem fishing, lol !

I thought bass, was a guitar ? bass would be fine :smile:

El Barto 18-07-2012 10:46 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Dream Angel
ok, that would have been a first, someone taking my poem fishing, lol !

I thought bass, was a guitar ? bass would be fine :smile:

Well I am sure if you read poems to the worms to tender them up , you might get lucky at fishing ? :D

Adrienne 18-07-2012 10:50 PM

hmmmm, since I don't fish...

I will let you experiment........ with one of your poems ! :tongue: then you can let me know ... how it goes :D

El Barto 18-07-2012 11:01 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Dream Angel
hmmmm, since I don't fish...

I will let you experiment........ with one of your poems ! :tongue: then you can let me know ... how it goes :D

Umm I don't fish :cool:


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