Why are we here? My darlin
You got it all in your hand
But you don’t take the stand Why are we here? My darlin These reflections of past Where nothing lasts And blinded for the future to come It all seems to me Just make believe With a heart that’s silently numb If I could see again Would we ever blend? Why are we here? My darlin These feelings of yesterday Still haunt me today Carrying this weight on my own Tears too real, too true This ocean of blue With a love lost from home We have it all together But drifting like a feather Why are we here? My darlin |
I could probably sit and think about your poem all night long. I've been rereading over and over and I think I just about understand it but then I see it in a new light and I have to start over again. It's really a good poem. It's complex. Makes me think.
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Thanks Zydek.
Glad to hear it had cogs turning with more then one perspective! |
4~ because deep ~0~ waters are silent ~3
4~ but some can still hear voices coming from the ocean ~3 4~ so we go sailing ~3 4~ stuck at sea ~3 4~ waiting ~3 4~ because you could look at it in too many ways ~3 4~ you could take a picture and stare at it but even pictures fade ~3 4~ Lit infant and intermittent dream hermit at it for infinite days ~3 4~ vibrant contrivances chasing me down rabbit holes ~3 4~ and thoughts go roaming through the basement ~3 4~ because it's a maze ~3 4~ and we could stay down there till we wonder where the days went ~3 4~ Dream so lucid in this ****ty synchronicity city ~3 4~ and everything's under the sea ~3 4~ and it's quiet as **** out here ~3 4~ because ~3 4~ because deep ~0~ waters are silent ~3 |
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Now... that's thought provoking! Great poem. Thanks for sharing it. |
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