A poem I wrote
Hi everyone. So yesterday, I had a really strong urge to write a poem. I wanted to write a poem about expectations. The message I wanted to get across is that the most important thing is to love ourselves. When we love ourselves, its easier to love and accept others. Also, when others hurt us or deceive us, it is easier to forgive them when we love ourselves, because we didn't place our self worth and happiness completely upon them. We are already strong ourselves, and we understand everyone is human, and that in life we can get mad and hurt others, often unintentionally. So, I wrote a poem called Expectations. Here is my poem:
My dear one There is no other way That I would like you to be Than the way you are now It does not matter The words you have said Or the person that you were Yesterday and the years before Because today You are exactly the way That you should be The person you are today Is the person that I will love for all of eternity I do not expect you To be my hero That will satisfy all the expectations I used to have In my ideal partner and friend But simply my companion In the great journey I am taking towards Loving myself unconditionally I rest assured So happily and joyously That in loving myself That I am whole and complete And now I know That it is okay if others do not Love me the same way Because I am already filled With the greatest love in the world The love of myself A day after I wrote this poem, I had a really bad breakup with a boy I liked. When I came home, I scrolled across this poem I had written the day before, and I was so shocked at how much this poem applied to me. It's almost as if it was the perfect message for me at the time. I think this poem has a good message for people going through a similar experience or even just when they think about the people who they are close to in their lives. I hope you enjoy my poem...feel free to provide feedback :hug2: :smile: |
that is quite beautiful.
it seems to be a "channeled" message, as if a 'higher awareness' was speaking. the 'old soul' understanding is present, in youth. :smile: |
I agree, that was a message for you...from your guides. You participated in the writing but those were words that were timely. It is reassurance that you are loved.
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The Universe always knows and is always speaking to us - just sometimes (ok, most of the time...) we are too preoccupied to listen. <3 I needed to read this tonight - thank you <3
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B-e-a-utiful
One of the best poems I've ever read dude. You mind if I use it as a caption on an Instagram picture I'm about to post. I'll tag you in it or quote you or something.
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Thats a very good poem. You should keep it for future reading :)
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Wow, very nice poem. This does feel channeled to me. When you feel that urge, or that soft nudge when alignment occurs with the higher awareness, don't hesitate to write in the future. Hopefully, you keep a notebook or journal near for when this happens, because what is coming through is truly remarkable. :)
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Hey everyone, wow thanks so much for your feedback!! I actually have written more poems in the past. Maybe i will try to post them on here :) And yes, Nayte, feel free to use this as a caption
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That is beautiful.
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Beautiful!
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