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MidnightCry 12-02-2018 01:30 PM

You Were Once Around
 
Although I'm kind of used to
Not hearing your sound
I'm still heartbroken that you're
No longer around.

It's still your sound
I anticipate to find
Attachments of
The subconscious mind.

I stand where you did
I remember the day
You made your last sound
The life in you went away.

I'll never forget
The final rest
Time won't make me
Treasure you any less.

But now you're gone
No longer in pain
That's the only ray of sun
Through the rain.

Although I'm getting used to
Not hearing your sound
I'll never get used to the fact
You were once around.

Rsandee 12-02-2018 07:26 PM

Absolutely beautiful!
Take care!

MidnightCry 13-02-2018 01:44 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Rsandee
Absolutely beautiful!
Take care!


Thank you so much, you too. :hug3:

GreenRiver 22-02-2018 11:46 AM

:hug: :hug: :hug: :hug: Love it.

blackraven 22-02-2018 01:25 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by MidnightCry
Although I'm kind of used to
Not hearing your sound
I'm still heartbroken that you're
No longer around.

It's still your sound
I anticipate to find
Attachments of
The subconscious mind.

I stand where you did
I remember the day
You made your last sound
The life in you went away.

I'll never forget
The final rest
Time won't make me
Treasure you any less.

But now you're gone
No longer in pain
That's the only ray of sun
Through the rain.

Although I'm getting used to
Not hearing your sound
I'll never get used to the fact
You were once around.


Midnight - This is beautiful! I think a lot of people can relate to this poem.

MidnightCry 28-02-2018 11:05 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by GreenRiver
:hug: :hug: :hug: :hug: Love it.

Thank you! :hug3:

MidnightCry 28-02-2018 11:06 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by blackraven
Midnight - This is beautiful! I think a lot of people can relate to this poem.

Thank you so much. :hug3:


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