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Nowayout 18-10-2017 01:24 AM

Bots In My Head
 
I have bots in my head
Bots in my bed
Bots for fingers

They have infested
Cyberland with botulism
And it's spreading....

Soon you will not know
Your own thoughts
In your head

Do you want proof!
Then tell me
What is it

You just read.

Lightwaves 18-10-2017 07:03 PM

Words colliding together to make some meaning come across. Your poem is beautiful. The words though are not You. I would like to read more of your poems.

Nowayout 19-10-2017 01:00 AM

Thank you Lightwaves.

Poetic expression is like jumping off a cliff, you don't always know where you will fall.

Sometimes you hit the rocks...:wink:

Lightwaves 19-10-2017 07:53 AM

As long as you don't *actually* go cliff jumping into sketchy waters.

Nowayout 22-10-2017 05:55 AM

We are like a tower of thought, all building upon the other.

Jump over the edge, and go back to rock bottom. That place that supports the tower.:wink:


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