In Your Eyes
In your eyes, I see hid/den glory ...8syls In my eyes I see you..6syls Laughing at the way we move around...8syls Eye for an eye we dance...6syls Lust and love es/caping..6syls Let it go on the wind...6syls Life is so big and small...6syls I looked In your eyes syl·la·ble /ˈsiləb(ə)l/ Learn to pronounce noun a unit of pronunciation having one vowel sound, with or without surrounding consonants, forming the whole or a part of a word; e.g., there are two syllables in water and three in inferno. verb Peace... always. |
Jesus Saves
Lord of the star/fields heav/ens glory...8syl Gives way to our soul's story...6syl Jesus walked on dirty wat/ers 8syl For the sake of dis/orders... 6 syl He with/stood the cur/rents...6syl As the de/vil churned deep...6syl Within depts of tor/rents...6syl Jesus saves The drowning Some small edits... Lol. Corrections always welcomed. |
Quietus poetry form
First stanza is a quatrain with 8-6-8-6 syllable count in end rhyme abab + Followed by 6-6-6 syllable count tercet, end rhyme ccc + Concluded by an equal syllable count rhyming couplet using refrain from first line, as the last line of the poem The refrain is also the poem title Syllable counts can be tricky. Use the poetrysoup.com syllable counter to check |
Head melds with heart
Head melds with heart, ushering calm Poised thus in alignment Bliss mist applies its healing balm Soul rests in contentment The way is surrender Beholding Gods wonder No hearts stand asunder Erst fears depart Head melds with heart |
Yes I’m coming in now to get picky with nowayout.. hehe
Your first stanza looks slightly off me thinks .. ‘In your eyes I see hidden glory’”- in my eyes I see 9 syl’s. |
Poets at work
Poets at work, soul search for rhythm Sacred geometry At play within mind-body prism In continuity As love for love does long The koel sings it song Carrying all along Passion’s quirk Poets at work |
Our ugly side
Our ugly side, anger and greed Game of one-upmanship Endless craving beyond our need Gods love not our flagship At all costs need to win Deafened by ego din Delusion begets sin Ego lust ride Our ugly side |
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Well then elaborate? In your eyes I see hid/den Glo/ry??? Ok then... In eyes I see hidden Glory... God help us to see! :hug3: |
What are fears
What are fears - attachment to form Our soul not organic Fleeting is destiny spawned storm Reclaim joy ecstatic Why we choose to suffer Rather than bliss caper Is because of stupor Ask heart’s tears What are fears |
Love empowers
Love empowers both heart and mind Miracles manifest No trace remains of ego bind Love infallible litmus test No longer weigh and size As we welcome surprise Delighting in bliss rise Presence towers Love empowers |
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