Quietus Poetry Form
First stanza is a quatrain with 8-6-8-6 syllable count in end rhyme abab +
Followed by 6-6-6 syllable count tercet, end rhyme ccc + Concluded by an equal syllable count rhyming couplet using refrain (any length as of poet’s choice) beginning with the first word (or words) of the first line, as the last line of the poem The refrain (last line of poem) is also the poem title Looking forward to contributions! |
Where there is smoke
Where there is smoke, there is fire Look then at heart’s yearning Bliss rapture for which we aspire Each tremor, love stirring Silence now outer din Redemption lies within Magnetism on our skin As love bespoke Where there is smoke |
Prey or predator
Prey or predator, what’s our choice Is there a third option Hark in stillness, to conscience voice Exit agitation By God, so created Blissful heart, elated Why be subjugated Neither holds favour Prey or predator |
Light of Christ
Light of Christ, veiled by delusion Simply with love align Make still now, fickle attention Gather under His sign Love flow, in heart aglow Go there in stillness slow Feeling bliss throbs mellow Direct sight Light of Christ |
Simply be aware
Simply be aware, each moment Be wary of stupor In silence, heighten bliss quotient Make each life pulse super As love does love throbs greet For pure hearts, easy feat To feel magnetic heat Sidestep ego snare Simply be aware |
Oh, be quiet, for the love of God....
Watch this perhaps.. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ykH8E9wTCcQ I liked the bit at about 18:00 min in.. Lol. |
Great presentation, Nowayout! Hope more people see this. Perhaps you should share on the Christianity forum
The animal sacrifice linked to ‘Jesus died for our sins, to cleanse our sins’ bit doesn’t resonate but overall, the message was meaningful. Also doesn’t explain, how man went astray … I mean, if we have in us no gross matter, how did man ‘fall’, so to speak? Some missing links … |
There is no one here
There is no one here, oh hermit Save boundless bliss delight Stance erect, we sight the summit Joyful each day and night All one; see through His eyes We are He, in disguise No one’s born, no one dies So spake the seer There is no one here |
Heart grants consent
Heart grants consent, to warm embrace In a non-judging stance Seeing God in each, face to face Pristine childlike vibrance Feel bliss magnetism warm Imbibe benign bliss storm God enlivening form Infuse intent Heart grants consent |
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In the end, we want what God wants. And Jesus did not die for our sins, that's a fundamentalist view, the speaker, he was just presenting the flaw in that ( I hope) as you picked up on. Jesus is the good news! Heaven and earth are re-uniting??, hell is going to be removed... Animal sacrifice was a thing they did back then, many other religions did that, we are progressing...lol. Anyway, it's not just about you, or me. We are talking about God's divine plan, no less. The Christian forum I avoid, too much gnashing of teeth.. I prefer poetry and the gnashing of souls. Peace and Light be with you, it's all good when it comes from the heart. |
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