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Light Mage
15-09-2006, 12:17 AM
[CENTER]Siren of the Desert
Calling out to me
Queen of desolation
Spirit set me free...

I saw her standing in the desert
Starlight gleaming in her eyes
Sandstorm patterns swirling

kundalini
15-09-2006, 01:20 AM
That's a brilliant poem, Light Mage! You applied your creativity well here, that is for certain! Should you have a deep interest in poetry, maybe you should check out wordbyword, the poetry forum. That place is teeming with creativity and inspiration!

Great poem, Kundalini.

peteyzen
15-09-2006, 08:04 AM
Fantastic poem light mage, raelly enjoyed it, excellent

Light Mage
18-10-2006, 11:08 AM
Thank you! :angel7:

The original poem was just 3 verses long, then quickly grew to 10 verses.

A few months later I went back to it and added the last 3 verses at the end... after being "inspired" by the death of someone I'd just started to get to know.

This was a few years ago now. Time has certainly gone fast!